Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
My Drawing of the Modern Tin Man
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Wow Tayla, what an awesome piece of art! I love that you created a modern version of the Tin Man, what a cool idea. I can tell you have put a lot of time and effort into it, it looks fantastic. The Tin Man is probably my favourite character from the Wizard of Oz, do you have a favourite character? How are you enjoying the book so far? Keep up the amazing work! Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHello Caitlin, Thank you for your amazing comment! Hmmm My favorite character is probably the scarecrow because he is really funny, I am really enjoying the book so far and I can't wait until I reach the next chapter!
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ReplyDeleteAnd so you should be very proud of this piece of art, it's a great modern take on a classic character. I like hw the clothing looks like metal. Why did you choose to put an earring as a cross? I would have chosen to use a heart! Great work. Mrs D
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