Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, May 15, 2018
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
You are good at using descriptive words.
ReplyDeleteWhen you said that you felt the the cold breeze, it reminded me about springtime.
Maybe you could write about where in America the Hollywood sign is.
What made you get the idea of writing about the Hollywood sign?
Well thank you for asking and the Hollywood sign is in Hollywood and the reason i wrote about it is because we had to do a famous land mark so i chose the Hollywood sign because it looks really cool
Delete-Tayla :)