Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 9, 2019
My Biteable on Sir Edmund Hillary
My Biteable ( The Best one ever!!!! ) on Biteable.
This is my Biteable on Sir Edmund Hillary, On this Biteable you will learn all about Sir Edmund Hillary. Please comment and tell me what you like and what I could work on Thanks!
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We like the way you shared your information on a Biteable. We learnt a lot of interesting facts about Sir Edmund Hillary. Maybe next time check your spellings before you post your video.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Miss Raynel for the feedback, on my next Biteable I will be sure to check my spelling before I post it!
ReplyDelete-Tayla :)